What a personal website review looks like.
This is a demonstration using an imaginary Yorkshire business, so you can see the level of detail before you book.
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Demonstration · Not a client project
A customer's first five minutes.
North Riding
Garden RoomsGarden roomsProcessAboutGalleryContact
Garden RoomsGarden roomsProcessAboutGalleryContact
Beautiful garden rooms, built in North Yorkshire.
We design and build garden rooms for work, rest and everything in between.
Bespoke designTailored to your space and how you live.
Quality buildBuilt to last with care and attention.
Local teamProudly based in North Yorkshire.
Serving North Yorkshire and the surrounding area.
- 01
Make the first sentence more specific
Explain what you build, for whom, and the main benefit in one clear sentence.
- 02
Bring the main enquiry route forward
Move the primary call to action higher up the page and make it the obvious next step.
- 03
Show the service area clearly
State the areas you cover so local visitors know you work near them.
Fix first
- Clarify the opening sentence
- Make the main action obvious
- Add the main service areas near the top
- Use one consistent enquiry route
- Check the site works well on mobile
Improve next
- Add a short process
- Show more real project photographs
- Add genuine customer feedback
- Strengthen useful local pages
- Answer common questions plainly
Leave alone
- The layout is clean and easy to scan
- The existing colours feel trustworthy
- The gallery is easy to navigate
- The contact page has the essentials
- The domain is clear and relevant
You leave knowing what matters.
You receive a plain-English walkthrough of your website, written priorities in the order they will make the biggest difference, and a call with Tom to talk through everything.
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